Again, I profess thanks for your full attention to detail in critiques. Hopefully as a deviant you are still around. Most aren't these days, so it's unlikely, but I'll comment anyway.

You are very driven to understand a subject in writing and are willing to delve into the words to find what you will, and I'd just like to say, from expericence, that is not all that common. I hope you continue to pursue your interests and talents.

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Breaking entering
The dark and lonely places
Finding a big gun